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Buying clothes in a sale, looking for group-buy deals if we need,and so on.I don't think these make us smart consumers. Actually when we eat out or travel,we will spend lots of time to look for group-buy deals.Time is cherish to us.We can use these time to do many avaluable things.As a student, the most important things is to study hard and improve our grades.On one hand maybe we save a little money,on the other hand we spend much more than we want.Such as if we have kinds of coupons we will go to eat out on the next time.When we find there is a big sales in the suppermarket,maybe we don't need anything,we also buy them,just because big sales. I remmerber last time my friend and I went to the RT-mart.We just wanted to buy some common uses.But there was a big sale.My friend bought a lot of unuseful things.At first,she just wanted to save money,but at last she spent lots of. So,in my opinion,collect all kinds of coupons or look for a group-buy is not a good way to save money.
