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Buying clothes in a sale, looking for group-buy deals if we need,and so on.I don't think these make us smart consumers. If we eat out or travel,we maybe spend lots of time to look for group-buy deals.Time is cherish to us.We can use these time to do many valuable things.As a student, the most important things are to study hard and improve our grades.On the one hand maybe we save a little money,on the other hand we spend much more than we want.Such as if we have kinds of coupons we will go to eat out on the next time.When we find there is a big sales in the supermarket,maybe we don't need anything,we also buy them. I remember my friend and I went to the Rt-mart.We just wanted to buy some common uses.But there was a big sale.My friend bought a lot of useless things.At first,she just wanted to save money,but at last she spent lots of. So,in my opinion,collect all kinds of coupons or look for a group-buy is not a good way to save money.
