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请以“My Favourite Fruit” 为题写一篇英语作文。
要点：
1. 简要介绍这种水果的形状、颜色等特点；
2. 列举你喜欢它的原因（至少三条）。
要求：
1. 语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 选择除桔子之外的其它水果；单词拼写做的很好，请注意积累词汇量；正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；语言不流畅；请注意分段；请提高文章内敛性，段落和句子要围绕主题展开；连词使用偏少。
My Favourite Fruit Of all the fruits, I like apples best. First it is very beautiful. It is red and round. You can’t help eating it when you see it. Second, it is very sweet. It is really a kind of enjoyment when you taste it. Third, it is said that apples are very good for our health. There is a saying: “One apple a day, keeps a doctor away.” It means that if you have one apple every day, you won’t get any disease. The apple is not only an ordinary kind of fruit, it can also keep you away from disease, so there is no reason to refuse it. Try it and enjoy it!
