1999年专四作文真题:电视广告的优缺点

拼写做的很棒，学术词汇可适量增加；可适当增加复合句和从句的使用；衔接词和过渡词用的很不错。

A Major Advantage of Advertising on Television Nowadays,with the development of technology and economy,there's a hot debate on whether TV advertising brings as benefits.However,as far as I am concerned,TV advertising has its advantages than disadvantages. On the one hand,showing TV advertising in the middle of those TV series we are watching can make us avoid being a couch potato.For exemple,when we watch TV series dedicatedly,we always forget the lunch,the dinner or both of them.It's really harmful to our health.However,if there are showing the TV advertising,we will think of the time that we should eat something though we may be unsatisfied with that annoying TV advertising.And for showing the TV advertising,we can spend the time relaxing our eyes,our body which,in essence,benefits our health. On the other hand,if we can regard the TV advertising as a chance for jobs,study and so on,we can catch these chances well,especially for the students who are going to graduate from the university.Those who major in business can find a good company or start their own business.Those who like inventing can be inspired from TV advertising and then invent something which meet the needs of the public.Anyway,just like the old saying,"Where there is a will,there is a way."If you have your dream,just to find the chance to make it come true,no matter where your chance comes from,even though it comes from TV advertising. In conclusion,every coin has its two sides.Never judge something with one angel.TV advertising has its advantages though sometimes it may make us unsatisfied with it.