小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. she has long black hair, two big bright eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better than others,and she is good at singing. She is not only clever but also very nice girl. She likes reading books , playing computer games and playing chess. She often helps us, and our classmates like her very much.