小学一年级英语作文:Good friend

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I have a good friend. She is a beautiful girl. She owns long black hair, two big bright eyes and a red mouth. Her voice is better than others,and she is good at singing. She is not only clever but also very nice girl. She likes reading books, playing computer games and playing chess. She often helps us, and our classmates like her very much.