单词拼写做的很棒,还请注意增加词汇的积累;但从句使用不熟练,注意平时练习中多积累;过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当,缺少组织,可适当增加连接词的使用。
My new teacher is my science teacher. He’s very strong. He has a big mouth, two big ears, two big eyes and a nose neither too big nor too small. He often wears a black new shirt and brown pants, with two big shoes. My science teacher is quite kind. And he is very smart, isn’t he? Today, he give science class and all of us feel very happy. Because he is so funny. Can you guess who is he? He’s a Mr. Zhou.