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2010-2012全国中考英语试题汇编试题(21)写作:My Favourite Fruit

发布时间:2013-07-09 18:34浏览次数:384
要求:

请以“My Favourite Fruit” 为题写一篇英语作文。


要点:

1. 简要介绍这种水果的形状、颜色等特点;

2. 列举你喜欢它的原因(至少三条)。


要求:

1. 语句通顺,语意连贯;

2. 选择除桔子之外的其它水果;
3. 词数:60—80词左右。
用户的作文(系统评分59.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达比较灵活,学术词汇的使用要继续加强;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;文章结构不够严谨,应增加过程性词汇的使用;请注意分段。

用户练习作文:

My Favourite Fruit Of all the fruits, I like apples best. First it is very beautiful. It is red and round. You can’t help eating it when you see it. Second, it is very sweet. It is really a kind of enjoyment when you taste it. Third, it is said that apples are very good for our health. There is a saying: “One apple a day, keeps a doctor away.” It means that if you have one apple every day, you won’t get any disease. I think more and more people should have apples,Because it can make your body more health.it can also keep you away from disease, so there is no reason to refuse it. Try it and enjoy it!

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