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With the rapid development of economy,more and more people live a well-off life.Therefore,many people possess enough time and money to travel,which pushes the prosperity of tourism.However,the booming tourism leads to a heated discussion among people currently.Some think that it can greatly propel our country's economy.While others oppose that it will damage the environment.And in my opinion,I think the advantages of booming tourism are outweigh the disadvantages. On the one hand,a booming tourism denotes a good economic condition.More and more people begin to purse mental relaxation and entertainment,which relects a whole country's steady develpment.And it can be a virtuous cycle.Tourism pushes economy forward,and prosperous economy creates good conditon for tourism. On the other hand,it is a fact that booming tourism does cause some damage to the local environment,which is an inevitable result.However,If local government attaches importance to it and makes some relevant laws,the environment can be protected and improved.In addition,the fund of enviromental protection can derive from the revenue of tourism. In a word,although booming tourism will cause damage to environment somehow,we absolutely can't ignore the far-reaching significance it brings to us.
