雅思TASK1小作文模拟题:快餐 Fast food

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The above colourful pie chart shows us about the popularity of fast food among teens in America recently. From the chart, it seems that local fast foods beats foreign ones. In the following more detail about the formulation of fast food will be give. First of all, the local fast foods are on the top. We can see that the hamburger takes the most amount of the market, which is up to one thirds of the pie (33%). And the second on the top list is pizza which is 7% less than that of hamburgers. What more, another prevailed one amounts for 22% is French fires. Then the rest of 19% are composed by fried children, tacos and sushi, which are 9%, 7% and 3% respectively. To sum up, with the increasing diversity of fast foods in America, hamburgers and pizza still are teenagers' favourite. While the other from outside like sushi are prevailed in small amount group.