2013-2014年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(46):献爱心活动

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To all the students: There was happend a great earthquake in yu shu,qinghai on 2010,April 14th. A amount of people was destried their home by this great earthquake,And a large number of people was dead or lose in this earthquake. Now Be concerned about is the most important thing for who was during this earthquake.So, we should show to them our warm hearted.Now,they are homeless and have a few foods.clothes,doctors and madcines.I wrote this proposal is in order to call at all students to help them. I hope that every student can help them use themself power,The necessities hand in offlce of student club.