文中如若增加一些长难句的使用,会为文章添彩;作者能较熟练地使用一定的学术词汇,但请注意单词拼写的检查;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;可以适当增加副词的使用。
now the whole world has recognized the seriousness of spelling,which are condidered as the major cause for the people write a wrong world.consequently,more and more individuals srart to adopt a new way of spelling. the reasons for this phenomenon are simple .in china,many yong people attach importance to readind and speaking and think little of spelling .mang people think it is not importab=nce to speeling. a lots of people find that the benefits of being a civil servant arev too good to use that . in my opinion,the spelling systen is necesssary in some fields of the learning english.we have every reason to believe that speling in china has a bright future.