一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

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Today is a busy day.I am going to my English school to learn English at eight o'clock.After that,I will go home.I am going to read books,listen to music and use computers.At night,I will watch TV and talk to my parents.But today I never go outside to play with my friends.Beacuse I like quite.This ismy busy day.I'm very happy.