文中词汇表达稍欠丰富,但单词拼写做的很棒;加强长句的练习,会取得更不错的成绩;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Today is a busy day.I am going to my English school to learn English at eight o'clock.After that,I will go home.I am going to read books,listen to music and use computers. At night,I will watch TV and talk to my parents.But today I never go outside to play with my friends.Because I like quite. This is my busy day.I'm very happy!