一年级英语作文:A Busy Day

单词拼写做的不错，文中词汇表达贫乏；作者应在平时练习中加强复杂句的练习；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Today is a busy day.I am going to my English school to learn English at eight o'clock.After that,I will go home.I am going to read books,listen to music and use computers. At night,I will watch TV and talk to my parents.But today I never go outside to play with my friends. This is my busy day.I'm very happy!