托福Toefl作文模拟题附范文 第52篇:草率的判断是否可信

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Today was my favorite teacher's class and his name is Andy. He is handsome and knowledgeable.That will be g great number of students to take his classes, for his classes is interesting and very useful for us. He always teaches us about history and geography. But this time he was very disappointed that some people spoke ill of his back that to force his leave. He could not bear it. I was very upset on the way to home. At that time it was extremely cold and rained continually that I could felt my feet anymore. It was a dark path and no one saw I cried, the tears stream down her cheeks. I was not sure that what I crying. But I was afraid that I will miss some important people.