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托福独立写作模拟题:关于互联网

发布时间:2013-05-16 14:26浏览次数:640
要求:
Directions: The independent essay usually asks for your opinion about a familiar topic. You will have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your response. Typically, a good essay for the independent topic will require that you write 300–350 words.
Question: Advances in transportation and communication like the airplane and the telephone have changed the way that nations interact with each other in a global society. Choose another technological innovation that you think is important. Give specific reasons for your choice.
题目讲解
本题要求考生通过定位,概括和分类仔细审题,就某个问题写一篇感想,或就一个事件进行阐述,解释以及论证自己的观点,列出提纲明确主题并围绕主题来写作和修改文章
观点提示
1、 提出因特网改变了人们购物的方式来强调网络购物的便捷。
2、 补充因特网另外还有改变了人群交流的方式来阐述在线交流的广泛。
用户的作文(系统评分35.5分
评语:

文章词汇表达多样性不足,不过词汇拼写要再接再厉;建议平时练习中,多多背诵一些好的句子和文章;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The first,i will show something you can't do ,due to without internet,you can't send and recevie a masseage /mail within 1 minute or less than 1minute,you can't talk to your family,friend.co-worker with vider and you can't handle your bussiness on time......so much "you can". what are mean? that mean our dairy life can't be convinient without internet! even something acopany for example, young penple drop in net refuse communicate with really world,but we need accept:internet is a great thing!

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