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作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间，词汇表达灵活性也要提高，单词拼写错误较多；采用了一些简单的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
nowadays ,a wave of over package seems to sweep over the whole society.every year,millions of people waste lots of cardboard use packaging in order to something looks more beautiful,get good pay back or make much more money. the reasons for the popularity of over package in china are sasy to understand.firstly,the increased intrest is also duo to the rising importance of commodity.secondly,more and more peole and adults are realasing the outward appearance of things can improve the quality of yhe things.it can increase the target consumer groups. in my opinion,over package is not just the wast of money .socirty as a whole should work together to ensure the proper usage to make sure the overpackage
