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with the ever wider use of the internet,online shopping is growing tremendously.people now can buy almost everything on the internet ranging from foods,books,clothing to furniture. the most important advantages of online shopping its convenience.it allows consumers to shop at home with 24 hours access and save time traveling to retail stores.also,consumers can exchange infomation online through chatting and discussion to help them make wiser and better decision. but online shoppinghas disadvantages as well.privacy and security are the top concern of consumers.many consumers are worried zbout credit card frauds and the use of their infomation for other purposes. with the improvment on privacy and secutitu of the internet,it will gain respect and trust consumers and will be much more widely used than today to bemefit both he socirty and individuals.eventually,more people will adapt to online shopping technology and will be able to enjoy the convenient and innovative of shopping
