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①温州是一个美丽的城市，位于中国的东部（in eastern China），气候温暖（warm）, 准备轻便的衣服。（light clothes）②有很多美丽的风景，比如雁荡山（Yandang Moutains）和南麂岛（Nanji Island）等。③ 靠近大海，可以品尝海鲜（seafood）④交通方便⑤这里的人很友好,并且你很愿意做她的导游。
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wenzhou is a amazing city with extend the coasline.it locatrd in eastern China .it is warm here。please prefer the casule clothes.there are wonderful scenery.for example,yangdang mountain and iceland.it is close to the sea and conrenient transportation.the people here are very friendly and wiling to u guide .it is welcomed by most people duo to various reasons.from the perspective of consumers ,it can make people fell better when u come to this place.travel is definitely a relaxing experience.when travels takw a walk around the wenzhou.they tend to nothing but relaxed.it is learning exoerience. the benr=efits of travel have long been recognized.people should travel more when opportunities are available.
