文中词汇较灵活,但要注意积累学术词汇,拼写错误也要注意;简单句比重稍微偏高,注意文中的句子错误;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
my will is frail,because i always eacape reality when i meet some problems. from my little girl to now. my will is frail all the time , sometimes i wanted to change the status currently, but it's difficult, so my life fall into difficult position easily that i am not happy, i think strong will is important ensure to succcess. the firm person can finish great mission. so do the students,don't study hard that may be not become useful person. i should be meet life again after this studies.yes!come on...