作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;作者能较熟练地使用较丰富词汇,以及部分学术词汇,单词拼写也要仔细;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段。
As all we have known, it is not really wise to draw a conclusion inmediately only based on what you've seen o heard, while it is a stupid indeed, in my mind. However, it's not such a simple issue as we take it for granted but a matter which sometimes will ruin all your effort you've done before. So, now it's time to pay enough attention to it. There are some virtual reasons that can support my view I've just proposed. First of all, what we see o just hear may cheat us, because we are no capable of making diference from the reality and the fake. Second, for some way, we are not so mature to deal waht we just have experimented and in some ocasions, we are more likely to be influenced terriblely by what we witness just with our eyes but not our brain. The last but not the least, making a rapid desicion is not a good indeed somehow. In my opinion, a mature desicion looks up to the time we spend on making.
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