文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,但学术词汇稍显不足;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
As all we have known, it is not really wise to draw a conclusion immediately only based on what you've seen o heard, while it is a stupid indeed, in my mind. However, it's not such a simple issue but a matter which sometimes will ruin all your effort you've done before. So, now it's time to pay enough attention to it. There are some reasons that can support my view I've just proposed. First of all, what we see o just hear may cheat us, because we are no capable of making difference from the reality and the fake. Second, in some ways, we are not so mature to deal what we just have experimented and in some occasions, we are more likely to be influenced terribly by what we witness just with our eyes but not our brain. The last but not the least, making a rapid decision is not a good indeed somehow. In my opinion, a mature decision looks up to the time we spend on making. In a word, if only we take enough time to considerate before we make a conclusion, we can get a mature one which can really help us a lot.
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