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2011年高考英语卷写作表达题目范文汇总(4):该不该禁止游客和动物拍照

发布时间:2013-07-10 18:00浏览次数:703
要求:
阅读下面的短文,然后按照要求写一篇150字左右的英语短文。
Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉) at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern Australia. All the koalas there are unhappy and complaining. You would be too if you were used to might activities and someone kept waking you up all day while you were trying to sleep it off. That’s right―sleep it off. The average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that make it sleepy.
The reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is so they can be hugged and photographed by tourists, who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experience. Whatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal, which is understandable. How would you react, my friend, if you were trying to sleep off a dozen times and some round, furry creatures smelling of grass kept waking you?  *考拉即树袋熊


写作内容

1.       以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;

2.       然后以120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论 

内容包括:

(1)     人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照;
(2)     假如你处在那些动物的处境,你会有什么反应;
(3)     你认为是否应该禁止和动物拍照。
写作要求
1. 在作文中可以使用自己亲身的经历或虚构的故事,也可以参照阅读材料的内容但不得直接引用原文中的句子;
2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。
评分标准
概括准确,语言规范,内容合适,篇章连贯。

用户的作文(系统评分73.0分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。

用户练习作文:

The passage tells us the koalas in the zoo are kept awake all day by human being to make tourists happy,despite of the fact that they need much sleep. People always like to take photos with animals when they are visiting zoos because the animals there are so fancy to them and they want to keep memories by taking photos.But human beings forget that all the animals have their own right to live on their own routines.Keeping animals in zoo is a behavior to break their routines. If I were one of the animals in the zoo,I must get mad when people keep waking me from a good dream.I really hate others bother me when I need a good rest. I do disagree bothering animals normal lives.But I don't object to taking photos with animals when visiting zoos.Because I think that people can take photos in a distance,which can promise that they will not affect the animals. In a word,I think there is no need to forbid tourists taking photos with animals in the zoo.

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