写作内容
1. 以约30个词概括这段短文的内容;2. 然后以120个词就“该不该禁止游客和动物拍照”进行议论
内容包括:
(1) 人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照;文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;上下文衔接不流畅,文章结构不严谨。
The passage tells us the koalas in the zoo are kept awake all day by human being to make tourists happy,despite of the fact that they need much sleep. People always like to take photos with animals when they are visiting zoos because the animals there are so fancy to them and they want to keep memories by taking photos.But human beings forget that all the animals have their own right to live on their own routines.Keeping animals in zoo is a behavior to break their routines. If I were one of the animals in the zoo,I must get mad when people keep waking me from a good dream.I really hate others bother me when I need a good rest. I do disagree bothering animals normal lives.But I don't object to taking photos with animals when visiting zoos.Because I think that people can take photos in a distance,which can promise that they will not affect the animals. In a word,I think there is no need to forbid tourists taking photos with animals in the zoo.