文中词汇使用灵活,学术词汇使用较丰富;作者句法很棒,合理使用了复杂句;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Living in an age when the adolescents are lack of the necessary guidance and supervision,we can never fail to figure out the fact that teenagers are become especially self-conscious. Under this circumstance,the youngsters are more likely to believe in what they have listened or seen instead of thinking twice before drawing their conclusions,which is pathetically and undoubtedly considered controversial or even unreasonable. The reasons why I insist on the viewpoint that we should never directly and irresponsibly come to conclusions only by listening or seeing mainly lie in the following two aspects. To begin with,it is a invariable law to every existence in the world that nothing will stay still even for just one second.So are the things happening around us. What we see or listen may be just some particular period of the development of things,which proves unstable and changeable. In addition,the perspectives we conclude just through seeing or listening are usually one-sided. Drawing conclusions rashly is not objective enough to make our statements persuasive. To sum up,it is unwise for us to define any thing as what we assume or imagine at first sight.Only by our serious thinking and accurate analyzing can we come up with more rational and reasonable conclusions. As all we have known, it is not really wise to draw a conclusion immediately only based on what you've seen o heard, while it is a stupid indeed, in my mind. However, it's not such a simple issue but a matter which sometimes will ruin all your effort you've done before. So, now it's time to pay enough attention to it. There are some reasons that can support my view I've just proposed. First of all, what we see o just hear may cheat us, because we are no capable of making difference from the reality and the fake. Second, in some ways, we are not so mature to deal what we just have experimented and in some occasions, we are more likely to be influenced terribly by what we witness just with our eyes but not our brain. The last but not the least, making a rapid decision is not a good indeed somehow. In my opinion, a mature decision looks up to the time we spend on making. In a word, if only we take enough time to considerate before we make a conclusion, we can get a mature one which can really help us a lot.
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