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2011年6月英语四级作文真题:网上购物

发布时间:2013-05-17 11:37浏览次数:9586
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题目 My views on Online Shopping
要求
1. 现在网购已经成为一种时尚  
2. 网上购物有很多好处,但也有不少问题 
3. 我的建议 
字数:120满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分66.0分
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作者句法基础较为扎实;文中词汇表达较灵活丰富,不过请检查文章的单词拼写;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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Nowdays,many of people is on online shopping,because they have no time to go out shopping, they can use computer to do the things instead of go out to do by themselves. On online shopping have been became a kind of fashion, they can know the latest trends from the world at the first time. Shoppping on the internet look as useful but also have some problem, example clothes can not try by yourself only though your eyes to decide buying. I think shopping on the internet although saved much time, we also take care of the swindler,somes money has gone also product has gone, the prodction quality very important too, Seeing from internet is beatiful but the quality is poor, the last one, shopping on the internet should be point at different product.

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