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Nowdays,many of people is on online shopping,because they have no time to go out shopping, they can use computer to do the things instead of go out to do by themselves. On online shopping have been became a kind of fashion, they can know the latest trends from the world at the first time. Shoppping on the internet look as useful but also have some problem, example clothes can not try by yourself only though your eyes to decide buying. I think shopping on the internet although saved much time, we also take care of the swindler,somes money has gone also product has gone, the prodction quality very important too, Seeing from internet is beatiful but the quality is poor, the last one, shopping on the internet should be point at different product.