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英语三级A卷作文模拟附范文:秋游通知

发布时间:2013-05-22 12:03浏览次数:2297
要求:
Direction: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a Notice according to the following instructions given in Chinese. Remember to write it in no less than 80 words on the Composition/Translation Sheet. 
事由:秋游 
参加者:一年级新生 
活动内容: 
上午:参观植物园并看《人与自然》的展览 
下午:颐和园 
集合时间和地点:l2月27日上午7:00;校大门口 
注意事项: 
1)自带午餐 
2)参加者在本周四前到学生会报名 
Words for reference: 

the botanical garden植物园

【高频词句】 
assemble集合 
enter name报名 
left baggage office行李寄存处 
1.According to the schedule,the touring will include…根据计划安排,旅行路线是… 
2.Please be on time.请务必准时。 
3.You call leave your baggage in the left.可将行李放在寄存处。

用户的作文(系统评分77.5分
评语:

拼写做的很棒,在平时练习中注意词汇量的积累;作者句法不错,但是文章整体句子稍微偏短;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少;请注意分段;可以适当增加副词的使用。

用户练习作文:

Here a notice about the autumn outing of grade 1.We should assemble at the gate at 7,on 27th,December.According to the schedule ,we will visit the botanical garden and enjoy the exhibit named human and nature in the morning. In the afternoon,we will arrive the Summer park to appreciate the beautiful scenery.Something should be paid attention that you should prepare lunch by yourself.If you want to take part in this activity ,you should enter your name to student's affairs division before Thursday .IF you take something expensive,you can leave your baggage in the left.Last but not least ,please come on time and take care yourself. Have a good time.

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