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作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；能够使用一些不错的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
How to make ourselvs smart customers? Being too careful with our money, as many students would think, seems not to be an effective way. Yet there is something peculiar we can put into practice despite of our identity as students: being wisely with our money while being careful with it. How would that make sense by the way? From the perspective of where we spend our money, being able to spend money wisely could make you a smart customer. Firstly, if you want to buy something you like a great deal but expensive meanwhile this mouth, like a pair of suit, you'd better be cartful with your money on something else instesd of buying a cheaper one. That means we spend our money on what we want most and save money on other issues. Secondly, we need not always saving money as in group-phurchasing. What we should consider is that how long will it keep working. That is, it is the quality that counts. Because when it comes to saving money, the quality will do this job. My viewpoints, therefore, is to consider what you want to buy most in the first place and then the quality as the second in addition to the idea carefulness with our money on how to become a smart customer.
