高一英语作文模拟题:我的家乡

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My hometown My hometown was sarround by woods.There are a lot of fish in the river.There are some of old sample old house.The stree road very small.Althought People works hard,but live is very poor.But now,You can see a great number of high building and kind of car move in the road.Industrial is deverlop,envonirment gets worst.And woods reduce,The fish is more or less.Pullution is very urgent the thing.