小学二年级英语作文:A Trip

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last week my teacher took all students went to a trip,this trip was visit the school surrored enquipment.first,my teacher took our through road enter a business area.this area include had food store,hair salmon restaurant,coffee shop and gas station.every store is not big,the store in front of have parking lot ,it's look clean and nest.coffee shop is name timhortant, this coffee shop is very popular ,most people get into drink a cup of coffee,eat some snack .in the winter they are very busy.this area transportion is very convennices,this area have two bus stop.usually,the bus per fifteen minuites across.my teacher talk about many things about this area,every one listening and remember .we're happy