雅思写作范文:城市交通问题

加强局势的变化，会取得更好的成绩；作者词汇使用较为丰富熟练，单词拼写方面要更仔细；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

nowadays ,we college students have come to realize that importance of urban traffic,.with an early and proper design,we v\can decide what to do to deal with the problem. in my view,there are three essential rules to follow when we met the urban traffic. firstly,knowing what we like most to do can reduce urban traffic ,s problem.secondly,What are the measures to reduce urban traffic.next,knowing what kind of things we usually do best is instrumental in helping ue dificine what jobs may suits us to management of the urban traffic. more severe punishment is definitely necessary to curb the traffic.no matter who the chief is,or what =the reason is, any people should be sevely punished.we need to attach importance to education .anyway,prevntion is always the best measures