2014年6月英语四级作文真题附范文(第2套):A Beautiful City in China

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A foreign friend of mine is going to come to visit my hometown——Nanjing.Nanjing has plenty of historical sites.In my opinion,the most famous is Sun yat-sen's mausoleum.I will take my friend there. Firstly,Sun Yat-sen was the leader of Xinhai Revolution and the first president of Public of China.He is the Father of China.Every year,lots of people from home and abroad come to remember him. Secondly，Sun yat-sen's mausoleum is located at Zijin Mountain which is a very beautiful scenic spot.On the Zijin Mountain,there are many other historical places,such as Zhongshan botanical gardon,Meiling Palace and Linggu Temple.I will take my friend to walk around. At last,Sun yat-sen's mausoleum is not far from downtown.After the tour,we will enjoy the meal in the downtown.I believe She will be attractive by lots of local delicious food in Nanjing.