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It's good mood for me to join this english test today, i have some idea when i saw the article title "the improtance of keeping a good mood", first i will clarify my opinion that keeping a good mood is important, say by world present, many of people believe mood can let someone happiniess and young ,if you have a nice mood year by year that you will less face to ill, Especially the woman who meet the difficult problems, they look like no happy that do not like eating and play, long time past, they will fall a low case caused many bad idea come out. Yes, a good mood is very improtant for us ,also little children ,student.and workers. please remember good mood can be the best way to success, many of people once meet some problems showing up pain, you should deal with it when you facing these problems is not fell sad, The last, i think myself is a true example that is what i have writtern this article, one opinion, when you see a man who with smile that he must have a good mood.
