雅思写作范文:手机与因特网

作者词汇表达较丰富准确，不过学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间；能够使用一些不错的从句；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Mobile phone and internet is very important communication tools in our society currently.because it's very useful between studying and working. The mobile phone can call person and write message, taking photos for your friends,listening music,now many people use mobile phone to contact friends and families because they busy working do not see them by themself. Another wechat function on it ,many people like it,you can through it to send messagge and photos. Intrenet also is useful that can read lately news from the world,using outlook to send mail and receive mail,can download some documents. Which one do you like best between mobile and internet? i think both is important for us.