邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

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From the passage we know that thousands of endangered animals are facing the threat of being bought and sold on the internet. Traders make a great profit from it，which is illegal. As is often read in the newspaper reports， wild life especially the rare species are threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit， which， of course， results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. Therefore， it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. First of all， it’s quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. In addition， the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals. If I were one of the endangered animals， I would hope that man could be a good friend of mine rather than my enemy.