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邢台二中2012―2013学年上学期高二年级期末测试试卷英语作文

发布时间:2013-05-17 17:27浏览次数:6620
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2010年以来,我国相继发生了几起校园暴力事件,使国人为之震惊,震惊之余,大家都陷入了沉思:我们该如何加强校园安全呢?请你以How to improve school safety为题,写一篇120词左右的短文。
参考词汇:校园campus 保安security guard
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作者词汇表达较为熟练,学术词汇使用不是很多;可适当增加从句和复杂句使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

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From the passage we know that thousands of endangered animals are facing the threat of being bought and sold on the internet. Traders make a great profit from it,which is illegal. From the passage we know that thousands of endangered animals are facing the threat of being bought and sold on the internet. Traders make a great profit from it,which is illegal. As is often read in the newspaper reports, wild life especially the rare species are threatened with extinction. Human beings are making attempts to hunt wild animals for a big profit, which, of course, results in a sharp decrease in the number of animals. Therefore, it is high time for us to take quick action to protect them. First of all, it’s quite necessary for every citizen to realize the importance of animal protection. Only by knowing its importance can people develop a sense of responsibility. In addition, the government should pass some laws to forbid any hunting of rare animals.

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