作者能较熟练地使用词汇表达,一些学术词汇的使用也比较灵活;可适当增加文中长句和复杂句的使用;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Currently,with the wake of development in Internet,there are more and more people spend time in surfing the Internet.Therefore,making friends online gradually wins popularity among young people.In my opinion,I think that it is an inevitable and good phenomenon,for making friends online can benefit us a lot. On the one hand,making friends online can enlarge our friends circle,enabling us to have opportunities to communicate with different persons.A large friends circle can help broaden our horizon and enrich our life,which adds flavour to our interpersonal interaction.For example,if we make friends with foreigners,we can know more about exotic culture. On the other hand,nowadays,young people are prone to share internal sentiment with strangers,for they can keep secrets and have more objective judgement.Thus,making friends online offers a port for our feeling.In some degree,making friends online and chatting with them can help us relief our emotion. In a word,making friends online does benefit us a lot.Not only can it help us meet with various people,but also it can give us a inner comfort.
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