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Dear John, I am very happy for getting your invetion,but I am sorry to tell you that I cannot go your home for having supper together.Because I should prepare for my exam which is important to me.I feel very sorry and if I have time,I will invate you come my home.I hope you and your parents will have a good time this evening. Yours, LiHua