2012年6月英语四级作文真题:过度包装的现象

有效地采用了一些简单的从句为文章增色；作者词汇量偏少，不过单词拼写方面做的不错；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。

Many product which we see in the world being a good packaging, on excessive packaging can attract people's eyes that sales volume rising fast. A good product need a good packaging. If you have not good packaging that people think is a poor quality product, of course, on excessive packaging quatation is higher than general packaging. The supplier in order to sale goods quickly that they have to make a beautiful packaging , in the compete society currently, the same product come out frequently,you will choose the gift with beautiful packaging when you join some party. I think it's not seeing a good packaging to choose product, some have no packaging product also the quality is very good, good product need good packaging. It's need to see what kinds of product, sometimes,on excessive packaging is good for the product,sometmes, some product need not excessive packaging.