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MY hometown In the past: green trees around the hometown; The river is clear that fish play; Housing humble Narrow streets. IN people life is poor that they are worked hard ; the high-rise buildings standing; The vehicle along the streets;the development of Industrial lead to environment deterioration; Trees reduce and the fish disappeared;the Pollution control priority now.