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2012年6月英语六级作文真题:人际沟通

发布时间:2013-05-18 10:50浏览次数:4567
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题目 The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication
要求
1.For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition.
2.the topic is "The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication"
3.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.
字数:150满分:100分
用户的作文(系统评分73.5分
评语:

文中词汇表达比较多样,能多用学术词汇就更好了;文章在句法方面做的很棒,从句和复杂句的使用不错;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。

用户练习作文:

The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication From the picture we can know,the father asked his daughter,"Hi,sweetie how was school today?"His daughter said:"You can read all about it on my Blog,Dad."Though this chat we know,the internet is full in our life,and it has an impact on interpersonal communication. I think the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is bad.In our life,we should make communication with person.If the internet replace it,we will become the cold and detached people,don't know what is love.If the internet replace face-to-face communication,we can't take chatting with parents and friends,so they could' t know we are love them.If in the firm,we can't tell the other what happen about some important things.It will bring on bad things.Somebody would say we always use Blog to chatting.I think It is only for the exchange of people. Though the internet has bad impact on Interpersonal Communication,but it has a good point,that is to connect.In the future,the internet will be better,and person always make chatting with each other.

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