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The Impact of the Internet on Interpersonal Communication From the picture we can know,the father asked his daughter,"Hi,sweetie how was school today?"His daughter said:"You can read all about it on my Blog,Dad."Though this chat we know,the internet is full in our life,and it has an impact on interpersonal communication. I think the impact of the internet on interpersonal communication is bad.In our life,we should make communication with the person.If the internet replace it,we will become the cold and detached people,don't know what is love.If the network instead of face to face communication, we can't tell our families and friends how much we love them.If in the firm,we can't tell the other what happen about some important things.It will bring on bad things.Somebody would say we always use Blog to chatting.I think It is only for the exchange of people. Though the internet has bad impact on Interpersonal Communication,but it has a good point,that is to connect.In the future,the internet will be better,and person always make chatting with each other.