熟练的使用了从句和复杂句;文中词汇表达较丰富恰当,学术词汇使用稍显不足;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Make friends online is popular by the students in the college, they through internet to make friends who come from different countrys. They often use QQ to search friends, sending message and photos in order to know each other ,even someone invite to meet. Many people like internet to make friends, if they make a good friend, it will be good for them, if they make a bad friend, they will become bad. Many young people affect study because they make a bad friend, they are not too study,and play day by day. also some people's money cheat by stranger,so people need be careful when you make friends on line. Last,i would to say make friends online is dangerous, to make friends in actual life is better than to make friends online. I have been not make new friends online for a long time,i think each people can make friends with the good life,i wish people made a good friend.
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