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Nowadays more and more students don't think highly of spelling.what cause the problem is that the expanding need of computer,everyone can use it thus they don't write words by hand.Students will unfamiliar to spelling.At the same time,students think it's very simple to spelling,they are over believe themsleves.and it's difficult to find the their is wrong,because they think their is right all the time. According the problems,we should take some measures to slove the problem.First students should often write by themsleves.and teacher should often remainds students if student they are spelling wrong ensure students spelling every word is right.stuents should have a good attitude ti spelling wordsParents should contral the time that students spent on play computers.