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2011年12月10日雅思写作真题:如何处理人与自然的关系

发布时间:2013-08-08 16:40浏览次数:9756
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Human activities have negative effect on plants and animal species. Some people think that it is too late to do anything about this problem. Other people believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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There is no doubt that our lives have a close relationship with the environment.But as the acceleration of social civilization,we have done a series of bad things on plants and animals.Now,a growing number of people are appealing to take some steps to settle this problem down. Some people hold the idea that it is too late to do anything because the numerous harms are unchanged.Now,we can't save this situation.However,some people are optimistic to believe that this problem can be settled well if we now take effective steps. Frankly speaking,what we had done in the past years definitely has serious harms on plants and animals.more and more species are disappearing gradually even some measures were taken.But,wore situation will happen if we don't handle this problem.So,in my view,effective measures can be taken to improve this situation and should be taken immediately.

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