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Dear John Thank you for your inviting. I'm very glad that, but I'm sorry to say that I can't go there and have a dinner with you. I have to prepare a test which wii be held the day after tomorrow. I'm very busy recently. The test is very important for me. If I pass the examination , I will get an award ,then I can get the permition to a key university. I think you will congratulate me. I wish you had a good time . I wish we would have a dinner together next time . Yours sincerely.