福建仙游县承璜第二学校2012-2013学年八年级上学期期末试卷作文试题

简单句型过多，从句使用不熟练；文中词汇较灵活，但要注意积累学术词汇，拼写错误也要注意；过渡词和衔接词使用不恰当，缺少组织，可适当增加连接词的使用。

The Internet Today,more and more people have their own computers in their rooms.Internet brings us many information and makes our life more beautiful.Internet can open up our eyes to outside world.In this information time,Internet can be useful.But there are also many disadvangtages of Internet. First,there are some information that isn't appropriat to us students.And if you use computer in a wrong way, it's also bad to your eyes and study. Now how we use computer in a right way?In fact it's important but easy.You must learn to control the time that you use the computer.If you don't think you could do well.You could ask your families or your friends for help.