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2000年专八英语作文真题:Education as a Lifelong Process

发布时间:2013-05-18 16:00浏览次数:5657
要求:
Some people simply see education as going to schools or colleges, or as a m eans to secure good jobs; most people view education as a lifelong process. In y our opinion, how important is education to modem man?
Write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:
EDUCATION AS A LIFELONG PROCESS
In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement, and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks.
Write your composition on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.
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Education as a lifelong process Education is very important to our life no matter from a shortermly perspective or longtermly perspective. Maybe someone thinks that, as matter of fact, realisticly well-education really can reassure the basic neccessity of a person. However, culturally and spiritually education can modern persons and has an influential impact to people. Here are several reason to explain my opinion. First of all, if a person has been well-educated, he was abandunt of overall knowledge. At least,

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