可适当增加从句的使用,注意文中的一些小错误;作者学术词汇的积累还有很大的空间,词汇表达灵活性也要提高,单词拼写错误较多;语言不流畅;连词使用偏少。
Education as a lifelong process Education is very important to our life no matter from a shortermly perspective or longtermly perspective. Maybe someone thinks that, as matter of fact, realisticly well-education really can reassure the basic neccessity of a person. However, culturally and spiritually education can modern persons and has an influential impact to people. Here are several reason to explain my opinion. First of all, if a person has been well-educated, he was abandunt of overall knowledge. At least,