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now the whole world has recognize the seriousness destory plants and animal species,which are considered as the major for the human activities.comsequently,more and more individuals start to adapt a low carbon lifestyle. Some netizens think it is too late to do anything about the problem. they hold that people should not be rensoble for what they do and what they say on plants and animal species.they think plants and animal less and less and In most of the countries, more than two plant and animal species are being wiped out each so human don,t have the ability to save the animals and plants.they also list the disadantages in term of fraud prevention and people do the measures to save the plants and animal compare to it is waste of time and money to do it.on the contrary ,others people are concerned that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation.it is human,s responsibility to protect the animal and plants. in my opinion,protecting the animals and plants is necesssary in some fields of the life, the goverment should strengthen the information exchange ,develop environment and management technologies and protection life or health of human,animals or plants.we individuals can also make a different buy leading a lifestyle on protection the aniamls and plants.only through making joint efferts can huamn beings win the battle to solve problems
