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题目要求：
Some people are always in a hurry to go places and get things done. Other people prefer to take their time and live life at a slower pace. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
题目分析：
两个态度都片面。所以不要急于选择。我们真正希望的是，不慌不忙(with full composure)，却很有效率(efficient)。所以，我更倾向于carefu planning。因为careful planning是成功的关键。另外，也要看是什么样的事情，工作、学习，都喜欢尽快结束(give it an end as quickly as possible)，但是与朋友消遣，与家人相伴，却不应该匆匆忙忙(bustle up)，而应该at a slower place。文中词汇使用灵活，学术词汇积累做的很棒，但拼写错误要注意；文中一些从句的使用为文章增色；语言不流畅；连词使用偏少。
With the rapidly developing economy where more people are involving in so-called modernized lifestyle ,and inceresingly competitive society, almost most people are experiencing stressful surrounding.Consequently , someone is relatively enjoyable about the kind of pace which hasten us, quicken us and encourage us, but other people prefer taking time and having fun with friends, family and so on. Personally, I think that both ideas have their own advantages and shortcomings, and I will give some reasoning about my stance . As for the quick pace, I truly think that it has not only amusing effectiveness to hearten us but also tremendou efficiency to achieve goals. For one thing, as a celebrity said ever, "pain means progress, and pain is progress". Indeed, under the massive stress, working at full blast, our potential can explode to assist us to accomplish our plans. Actually, living with stress , and living in quick-pace lifestyle, can play a pivotal role to nudge us to fulfill our destiny, as a sufficient catalyzer. However, besides its distinctive advantages, this kind of option could also bring some demerits ,including overdeveloped stress which perhaps overbears people, and ignorance for the colateral environment which probably contains more precious rubies such as friendship,fraternal relationship, and the beauty of natural marrow. Thherefore, quick-pace life encourage us to finish our goals even though we are experiencing immense discomfort at the same time, but it could bring some negative aspects,too. However,interestingly, the slow-pace lifestyle has almost absolutely converse influence on personal business.On the one hand , this kind of lifestyle, could provide plenty of time and space for people to enjoy the beauty of natural phenomena and social interaction, could emphasize the ture importance of our heart, and make us feel grateful for our society. We can pursue what we truly want to fulfill,search for what is truly significant in our life-long process,which could be incomparative among any other achievements. But ,on the other hand, the slow -pace lifestyle easily make us lose ambition to make progress. As a conclusion, both of the two methods has their advantages and disadvantages, so we should conbine them into a comprehensive methodology to instruct our life,i.e. combined pattern. Thus , we can quickly take action when we want to establish a plans , and simultaneously we can follow our true heart leisurely.
